Peer Correction please! Short story exercise :)
Would someone be able to point out any errors in this writing? I am studying on my own without a teacher so any help would be appreciated. All the past tenses are in preterite and as previously requested the English is at the bottom.
Much thanks ahead of time.
Raquel es abogada de Los Angeles. Ella es baja, hermosa, intelegente y alegre. Tiene pelo castana y ojos oscuros.
Arturo es psiquiatra en Buenos Aires. El es muy serio, alto y agradable. Tiene mucho exito en su trabajo.
Cuando Raquel llegó a Buenos Aires tomó un taxi a su hotel. Por la manana salío a la estancia Santa Susana para buscó a Rosario. Le preguntó a Cirilo, y le dijó a Raquel, Rosario se mudó a la capital hace mucho años.
Raquel volvío a la ciudad y busco la direccion Cirilo le dijo.
La direccion fue la casa de Arturo, y aqui Raquel y Arthur se encontaron.
En la casa de Arturo Raquel explique la historía de Rosario.
Arturo dijó a Raquel "Rosario es mi madre y Angel es mi hermano."
Arturo decidió le ayudo a Raquel
English:
Raquel is a lawyer from Los Angeles. She is short, pretty, intelligent and cheerful. She has brown hair and dark eyes.
Arturo is a psychiatrist in Buenos Aires. He is very serious, tall and nice. He is very successful in his work.
When Raquel arrived in Buenos Aires she took a taxi to her hotel. In the morning she left for the estancia Santa Susana to look for Rosario. She asked Cirilo and Cirilo told Raquel, Rosario moved to the capital many years ago.
Raquel returned to the city and looked for the address Cirilo told her.
The address was Arturos house and there Raquel and Arturo met.
In Arturos house Raquel told the story of Rosario.
Arturo told Raquel, "Rosario is my mother and Angel is my brother."
Arturo decided to help Raquel.
I am not handing this piece in. I am mostly just interested in where I am making mistakes. Sorry, I am a little limited as I have only learned preterite form
Thank you ahead of time 
