Applying for a Teacher´s job

Question

Dear Mr. Petterson

I wish to apply for the post of Teacher of Technologies and Computers in your High School.

I have considerable experience in teaching, having developed my career as a Technologies’ Teacher in the Public Education System of Spain for the last 15 years.

Nowadays Technology is developing and changing from one year to another and I believe that innovation is the key for the success as a New Technologies’ Teacher. I also considerer teaching a teamwork where you always have the opportunity of learning and interchanging experiences with your colleague. Finally a do believe that a consistent and well developed appraisal of the work is really important in order to know that your education´s methods work in the right direction.

I would be truly interested to come for an interview at your convenience.

Yours faithfully, raulgommar.

This is not spam. I believe this person is looking for help with English. I would be happy to help, but I can't do it right now. Raul, I can help you later today if no one else does in the meantime. Cheers! - 0095ca4c, Aug 3, 2013

You are right Margherite I was looking for help with the corrections of the text. Thanks. - raulgommar, Aug 4, 2013

Answer 1

Dear Raul,

I would correct the English in your third paragraph thus:

Nowadays Technology is constantly developing and changing from one year to another the next, and I believe that innovation is the key for the to success as for a New Technologies’ Teacher. I also considerer consider teaching as a teamwork where in which you always have the opportunity of learning and interchanging sharing experiences with your colleagues. Finally a I do believe that a consistent and, well developed appraisal of the work being performed is really important in order to know that your education´s methods work in the right direction. for the purpose of assuring that one's educational methods are headed in the right direction.

You should replace yours faithfully with "Sincerely yours," and spell your name: Raul Gommar.

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Thank you.

"teamwork" to "team effort in which" - gringojrf, Aug 3, 2013

Thank you for the help Jubilado and gringo! (hugs) - 0095ca4c, Aug 3, 2013

Thank you very much for your help. - raulgommar, Aug 4, 2013

Answer 2

This isn't a question, is it?

Sorry. I was looking for help with the correction of the text. - raulgommar, Aug 4, 2013