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13
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So - here is a story for us. Each person can write a new section, until we have a whole story!

Érase una vez, había un joven muy pobre, cuyo mayor tesoro era un gato blanco hermoso, llamado Ramon.

Once upon a time, there was a very poor young man, whose greatest treasure was a beautiful white cat, called Ramon.

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updated Aug 1, 2013
edited by rac1
posted by togtog
I have changed your category to, "Games." Do you have someone to correct? - rac1, Jul 17, 2013
This is a great idea! - Findy, Jul 17, 2013
Good idea togtog, let's have some fun! - annierats, Jul 18, 2013
Gekko had one going for months it was fabulous . - ray76, Jul 19, 2013
Dear rac - no, I don't have anyone to correct. Is there a way to get someone? - togtog, Jul 20, 2013

51 Answers

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Era una mapa misterioso con una parte faltado. It was a mysterious map with a part missing.

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updated Jul 25, 2013
edited by heliotropeman
posted by heliotropeman
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Vigorizado él manejó a la agencia de viajes para comprar tres boletos para Barbados como el mapa dirigo. Invigorated he drove to the travel agency to buy three tickets for Barbados as the map directed.

cat driving photo: Me driving Cat-driving.jpg

updated Jul 22, 2013
edited by heliotropeman
posted by heliotropeman
hehe Great idea for using that picture. - Findy, Jul 22, 2013
He loves driving, I can see that. - annierats, Jul 22, 2013
He has experience, as he got his driver's lecense from a cracker jack box. - pmikan-pam, Jul 22, 2013
Good man! Barbados here we come. Are you ready with the boat Jraider? - 0095ca4c, Jul 22, 2013
I am :-) say when - pmikan-pam, Jul 22, 2013
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El gato sabía que no podía fiarse de su amo, Ramón, porque los seres humanos son más codicosos que los felinos. Por eso pedí a su amigo Digger, un perro de raza labrador, que le ayudara.

The cat knew he couldn't trust his owner, Ramón, because human beings are greedier than cats. Because of that he asked his friend Digger, a pure-bred labrador, if he would help him.

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updated Jul 22, 2013
edited by annierats
posted by annierats
Hola!!!! - 0080b918, Jul 19, 2013
I'm glad his name wasn't Dagger :-) - 0095ca4c, Jul 19, 2013
Is digger a black lab? - pmikan-pam, Jul 19, 2013
I think he's the tall one, on the right. - annierats, Jul 19, 2013
I think Ramón is the cat and Felipe is the owner... - PumpkinCalabaza, Jul 21, 2013
*falls over laughing* - Findy, Jul 21, 2013
7
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La adivina falsa no es correcta porque el tesora fue sepultado por un antepasado de

Ramón quien era una famosa gato llamado ," el gato con nueve colas" , también

conocido como " nueve colas".

Ramón no era feliz él no quiero a compartir el tesoro con Felipe o cualquier otra persona.

The fortune teller is not correct because the treasure was buried by an ancestor of Ramon

who was a famous cat named, "the cat with nine tails" also known as "nine tails".

Ramon was not happy he did not want to share the treasure with Felipe or any other

person.

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updated Jul 22, 2013
edited by ray76
posted by ray76
Good one - pmikan-pam, Jul 19, 2013
6
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Ramón estaba muerta , si muerta de borracho . Mientras dormía su amigo Felipe robó el tesoro

, y se escapó con la novia de Ramón Annie la camarera .

Annie era solo interesado en el tesoro , no en romántica, por ahora.

Pero, nunca confíes una camarera llamado Annie.

Ramón was dead, yes dead drunk, while he slept his friend Philip stole his

Treasure and ran away with Ramóns girl friend "fast Annie " the barmaid .

Annie was only interested in the treasure, not romance; for now.

But never trust a barmaid named fast Annie .

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updated Jul 24, 2013
edited by ray76
posted by ray76
Ray, your mind works in mysterious ways! lol - Findy, Jul 22, 2013
I missed the part about them finding treasure. Where did they find it, in Barbados? - 0095ca4c, Jul 22, 2013
On Annies farm,Margherite , I think. - ray76, Jul 24, 2013
@ Findy , it worries me at times , but then what the heck your only young once . - ray76, Jul 24, 2013
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Ramón was not dead... (he has nine lives, remember?). He had memorized the map and decided to do the right thing...

Ramón no estaba muerto... (tiene nueve vidas, recuerdas?). Había memorizado el mapa y decidió hacer lo correcto...

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updated Jul 22, 2013
posted by Findy
And the right thing was...?? - 0095ca4c, Jul 22, 2013
6
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Ramón tenía los ojos de un color azul brillante. Era un gato muy inteligente y perspicaz, con un gran talento por la caza de pájaros y ratones.

Ramon had brilliant blue eyes. He was a very intelligent and perceptive cat, with a great talent for hunting birds and mice.

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updated Jul 22, 2013
edited by PumpkinCalabaza
posted by PumpkinCalabaza
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A Digger no le gustó esperar durante los meditaciones de Ramon, así que hizo un esfuerzo enorme para despertarle de su estado contemplativo .

Digger didn't like want to wait for Ramon to finish meditating so he made an enormous effort to awakenen the cat from his state of contemplation.

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updated Jul 22, 2013
posted by annierats
Kindly note my use of 'así que'. - annierats, Jul 21, 2013
Tomo nota la utilización de 'así que' amiga. - 0095ca4c, Jul 21, 2013
Muy bien! - togtog, Jul 22, 2013
Gracias. One must put the palabra del dia into practice. - annierats, Jul 22, 2013
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The stranger who dropped the map in their box, didn't realize that the map and the numbers revealed a buried treasure. El desconocido que ha caído el mapa en su caja, no se dieron cuenta que el mapa y los números revelan un tesoro enterrado

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updated Jul 22, 2013
edited by 0095ca4c
posted by pmikan-pam
Did Felipe suspect what it was? - 0095ca4c, Jul 18, 2013
Gracias Margherite, not really, love the photo. - pmikan-pam, Jul 19, 2013
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After minutes of studying it, Ramon showed Felipe the numbers that had been written at the bottom of the map.

Después de minutos de estudiarlo, Ramon mostró a Felipe los números que habían estado escrito en el fondo del mapa.

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updated Jul 22, 2013
posted by kdfore
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El aspecto de Ramon que el pobre le gustaba más era que Ramon podía hablar.

The poor man's favorite aspect about Ramon, though, was that Ramon could talk

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updated Jul 22, 2013
posted by kdfore
6
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Digger is well known for his solid shape, amazing energy, speed and style. He was considered by some to be a superhero dog. He has lead the blind, found explosives and rescued people Digger es bien conocido por su forma, su increible energia, velocidad y estilo. Fue considerado por algunos como un superhéroe perro. El ha hecho que el ciego, encontraron explosivos y rescatado personas.

updated Jul 22, 2013
posted by pmikan-pam
Also Pam, he can dig, cats are poor diggers. - annierats, Jul 19, 2013
Superdog! - 0095ca4c, Jul 20, 2013
Of course I should have mentioned that Annie, gracias - pmikan-pam, Jul 22, 2013
Digger the superdog, we shall not forget him, hiola Margherite - pmikan-pam, Jul 22, 2013
5
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Como había detectado algo muy sospechoso en las cuentas, tenía que escondirse y espiár a los contables de una empresa internacional.

As he had found something very suspicious in the accounts, he had to hide and spy on the accountants of a global firm.

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updated Jul 31, 2013
edited by annierats
posted by annierats
lol - 0080b918, Jul 31, 2013
5
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Desafortunadamente Ramón alcanzó con ellos en un momento compromotido.Unfortunately Ramón caught up to them in a compromising moment.

cat in therapy photo: funny cat pictures this is called aversion therapy funnycatpicturesthisiscalledaversiontherapy.jpg

updated Jul 24, 2013
edited by heliotropeman
posted by heliotropeman
They are wrestling.Dirty minds. - heliotropeman, Jul 22, 2013
Oh dear, thisis getting more and more interesting. - annierats, Jul 22, 2013
(That's probably the wrong hold, since I know nothing about wrestling and it doesn't make sense. But this story makes no sense either. lol) - Findy, Jul 22, 2013
lol Well, dirty minds! Anyone can see this is a Full Nelson... although it was compromising because it is an illegal hold. - Findy, Jul 22, 2013
Which one is Ramón? Top or bottom? - 0095ca4c, Jul 22, 2013
Well, seeing as Ramón is white, bottom, obviously! - togtog, Jul 23, 2013
5
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Desafortunadamente cuando Felipe llegó, Ramón perdió el equilibrio y se cayó sobre su cabeza. Estaba inconsciente y Felipe se le creía ser muerto.

Unfortunately when Felipe arrived, Ramón lost his balance and fell on his head. He was unconscious and Felipe thought he was dead.

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updated Jul 22, 2013
edited by 0095ca4c
posted by 0095ca4c
Wait.... Ramón is a cat??? *thinks hard* - Findy, Jul 21, 2013
Of course Ramón is a cat! Haven't you been following???!!! - togtog, Jul 22, 2013
Love it Margherite, we need more drama in the story. - pmikan-pam, Jul 22, 2013
He won't have to worry about his blood pressure, and he only used up one of his nine lives. - pmikan-pam, Jul 22, 2013
He was determined Frozen stiff on the necropsy! - pmikan-pam, Jul 22, 2013