Does this short story have any errors? Thanks!
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updated Jul 10, 2013
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It's probably a good idea to post the English version too so that our corrections match what you want to say ;) - Kiwi-Girl, Jul 10, 2013
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I don't understand 1, 2, 3 or 4. Can you put the English version?
updated Jul 10, 2013
posted by RafaelNoiret
