Would you please take a look at the passage for me?
I want to have my English passage translated into Spanish. I used SD translators and got three versions, but I don't know which one is the best. Would you please look at them and modify the translation for me?
English version:
"This late afternoon, I taught my classmate how to ride a scooter. In order to build up her confidence, I told her it was as easy as riding a bike. Also, I said, If you know how to balance a bicycle, you can learn riding a scooter in no time.
Spanish version:
"Esta tarde, enseñó a mi compañero cómo montar una moto. Con el fin de aumentar su confianza, le dije que era tan fácil como andar en bicicleta. También, dijo, "Si usted sabe cómo equilibrar una bicicleta, se puede aprender conduce un scooter en ningún momento."
2 Answers
Also enseñar should be conjugated for 1st person simple past tense.
También, dijo(wrong tense), "Si usted sabe cómo(not needed when using saber) equilibrarse (to balance oneself )en una bicicleta, se puede aprender ""(missing a preposition) conduce(infinitive) un scooter en ningún(incorrect... word for any) momento."