My Song Vestidos de rojo

Question

I have been learning spanish on my own for a year. I also write many songs. I was wondering if my Grammer was even close.The song is on youtube and is called Vestidos de rojo

http://youtu.be/cHMPdCVE13k

also I am looking for a picture for a cd cover of a spanish woman on the beach or a in a spanish dress. The cd is called Playa de sol. You could check that here if you want. http://www.ourstage.com/t/CUFNULHMSFHJ?u=2854ef

Gracias Amigos