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The episodes of Holy Week and the unfortunate “Happy Easter” resulting in the passage of the Due Obedience law seriously eroded people’s credibility in politics in general and in the government in particular.

or with commas

The episodes of Holy Week and the unfortunate “Happy Easter”, resulting in the passage of the Due Obedience law seriously, eroded people’s credibility in politics in general, and in the government in particular.

I think the second one is better, right?

Thanks

or maybe: “Happy Easter”, which resulted in the passage - flor7000, Jun 9, 2013

Answer 1

Thank you so much for your help!!!!

Answer 2

This is a run on sentense. See if you like this.

The episodes of Holy Week and the unfortunate “Happy Easter” resulted in the passing of the Due Obedience law. This seriously eroded people’s credibility in politics in general and in the government in particular.

Answer 3

I think so too!