A note to answer an email

Question

Dear Lawrence,

I am sorry for my late response but I have been traveling. Right now I am in South America, I came to Ecuador to open the market in Latin America because the SEO concept is something new here. I think we can talk in Skype on Monday 12:30 PM. That work for you? Please let me know. I would like to know if you have any goal that you want to reach in a time frame, if you have any other question I would appreciate you email me before Monday , so I will take a look again to the website and try to have the answer ready for you. I am really excited about our meeting, I am sure we can do something innovated about your site.

Answer 1

I edited the other half.

I would like to know if you have any specific goals and deadlines. Also, if you have any other questions I would appreciate that you email me before Monday. I will take another look at the website and prepare my answers for you. I am really excited about our meeting; I am sure we can do something innovative with your site.

Answer 2

Welcome to the forum. You did not make it real clear what you wanted us to do with regard to the email reply. Since you are fluent in Spanish, you probably would like a critique of your English reply rather than a translation of it into Spanish. Your writing is very good. I have made some minor tweaks to a few sentences but the way you wrote it would be understandable. Since you are discussing websites, I expect Lawrence would be familiar withe the acronym 'SEO'.

Here are my suggestions -

I would like to discuss (please fill in the topic of the discussion) on Monday at 12:39 PM on Skype. Would that work for you? If you have any other questions, I would appreciate it if you would email me before Monday.