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Question

Estaba oscuro, muy oscuro. Obtuve el control de mi mente con un gran esfuerzo, que me dejó temblando. Como otras veces estaba en sueños, esperé algunos segundos – no lo sé, algo y me volví ir. Una granulada sombría figura de dos dimensiones formada en frente de mí.

Saludos a todos.

Answer 1

I would like to see the English version of that.

Thank you.

It was dark, very dark. I got control of my mind, with great effort, which left me shaking. As in the past was in a dream, I spent seconds waiting - do not know, something and turned to go. A dark grainy two-dimensional figure formed in front of me. - Liquinn, May 28, 2013

I do not have an English version, do you want me to make one? Thanks. - Liquinn, May 28, 2013