Espanol papel
Could someone look at the Spanish parts of my paper? You don't have to write down EVERY error I made because I made a lot. I was just wondering if it makes sense, and if it is clear enough. I will be reading this paper out loud in front of my class. Any help would be very appreciated. ----I haven't figured out how to upload files yet, so I will post it here if anyone wants to take a look. Just want to see if the Spanish part makes sense---- THANK YOU!
- En Bolivia, la tierra es desigual. Hay mucho alturas de mesetas difirente. En algunos lugares, días puede tenga freo y calor tiempo. El mas alto lugar es Nevado Sajaa. Esta seis mil cincocientos cuarenta y dos. El populación de Bolivia es ocho millones ochocientos cincuenta y siete mil novecientos sesenta. ((In Bolivia, the land is unequal. There are many different heights and plateaus. In some places, days can have cool and hot weather. The highest point is Nevado Sajaa 6,542 meters. The population is 8,857,970 ))
- Lago Titicaca es el más alto lago en el mundo. Compartido con esta Peru. ((Lake Titicaca is the highest elevated lake in the world. It is shared with Peru.))
- La capital de Bolivia es La Paz. Tenga populación esta ochocientos setenta y siete mil trescientos sesenta y tres. Presidente Juan Evo Morales es prima nativo presidente. Esta democrático. ((The capitcal of Bolivia is La Paz. It has a population of 877,363. President Juan Evo Morales is the first indigenous president. He is democratic socialist.))
- La cultura de Bolivians tenga Espanola influir mucho pero ellos mantienen sus tradiciónes. Ellos tienen comida como anticuchos y Empanadas. Ellos tienen mucho fiestas. El mas popular es … y celebrado en La Paz. ((The culture of Bolivians has a lot of Spanish influence but they still keep their own traditions. They have foods like anticuchos and Empanadas. They have many holidays. The most popular one is… and is celebrated in La Paz. It dates back 2000 years ago.))
- Los colones de espanoles fueron capaces de combiner el cristianismo en los navitos durante la cruzada de Espanola en el año un mil quinientos. Desde entonces, Bolivianos siempre han sido catolics. Un grande estatua de Jesús fue creado en 1997. Mas grande esta en el mundo. Esta treinta y cuatro metros y pesa 2.200 toneladas. ((Spanish settlers were able to merge Christianity into the natives during the Spanish crusade in the 1500s. Since that time, Bolivians have always been Catholic Christians. A giant statue of Jesus was created in 1997. It is the largest statue of Jesus in the world. It is 34 meters and weighs 2,200 tons.))
- Similar a espanol y Mexicano comida, Bolivian comida mucho consiste de arroz, carne y verduras. Algunas fiestas se celebran con fiestas. El mas popular fiesta es celebra en la capital ciudad, La Paz. Se llama Carnaval De Oruro y esta celebra mas que dos mil años! ((Similar to Spanish and Mexican food, Bolivian food mainly consists of rice, beef and vegetables. Some of the holidays are celebrated with festivals. The most popular holiday is celebrated in the capital city, La Paz. It is called, Carnival of Oruro and it has been celebrated for over 2000 years!))
- Adela Zamudio no sólo fue un poeta, sino un feminista. Comenzó primer feminista movimiento de Bolivia. Ella expreso que hombres son injustan a mujeres y hizo muy famosa. En el once de Octubre Bolivia celebra Dia de Boliviamos mujer, El cumpleaños de Adela. ((Adela Zamudio was a not only a poet, but a feminist. She started Bolivia’s first feminist movement. She expressed how men are unfair to women in her poems, and became very famous. She inspired others to join her campaign to spread awareness of feminism in Boliva. On October 11, Bolivia celebrates Day of Bolivian Women, Adela’s birthday))
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I would be happy to look at it later tonight after I get off work. It's great practice for me! Can't promise I can catch everything but I'll see what I can do!
Here is what I have. Sorry it took longer than I thought it would because I got off work late last night and passed out when I got home. I didn't high light what I changed on here because I copied and pasted from a word document. But if you would like the one that shows the changes, I can email it to you if you want to give me your email.
Some common mistakes I saw were that you often forgot to make sure you adjectives came after what you were describing. EX: Camisa roja =red shirt-- NOT roja camisa.
Also, make sure you double check that if something is plural, that you have the appropriate ending for the adjective. If you have two red shirts, it should be camisas rojas not camisas roja.
I can't promise you everything is right or that I caught everything, but I hope I helped!
En Bolivia, la tierra es desigual. Hay muchas alturas de mesetas diferentes. En algunos lugares, los días puede tener tiempo frío y calor. El más alto lugar es Nevado Sajaa. y es seis mil quiniento cuarenta y dos metros. El poblácion de Bolivia es ocho millones ochocientos cincuenta y siete mil novecientos sesenta. ((In Bolivia, the land is unequal. There are many different heights and plateaus. In some places, days can have cool and hot weather. The highest point is Nevado Sajaa 6,542 meters. The population is 8,857,970 ))
Lago Titicaca es el más alto lago en el mundo. Es compartido con Peru. ((Lake Titicaca is the highest elevated lake in the world. It is shared with Peru.))
La capital de Bolivia es La Paz. Tiene una población de ochocientos setenta y siete mil trescientos sesenta y tres. El Presidente Juan Evo Morales es el primer presidente indígena. él es demócrata socialista. ((The capitcal of Bolivia is La Paz. It has a population of 877,363. President Juan Evo Morales is the first indigenous president. He is democratic socialist.))
La cultura de Bolivianos tiene mucha influencia española pero ellos mantienen sus propios tradiciones. Ellos tienen comida como anticuchos y Empanadas. Ellos tienen muchas fiestas. El más popular es … y se celebran en La Paz. El origen originó hace 2000 años.((The culture of Bolivians has a lot of Spanish influence but they still keep their own traditions. They have foods like anticuchos and Empanadas. They have many holidays. The most popular one is… and is celebrated in La Paz. It dates back 2000 years ago.))
Los colonos español podían combinar el cristianismo en los nativos durante las cruzadas Españolas en el año un mil quinientos. Desde entonces, Bolivianos siempre han sido cristianos católicos. Una gran estatua de Jesús fue creado en 1997. Es el más gran estatua en el mundo. Es treinta y cuatro metros y pesa 2.200 toneladas. ((Spanish settlers were able to merge Christianity into the natives during the Spanish crusade in the 1500s. Since that time, Bolivians have always been Catholic Christians. A giant statue of Jesus was created in 1997. It is the largest statue of Jesus in the world. It is 34 meters and weighs 2,200 tons.))
Similar a comida española y Mexicana, comida Boliviana consiste mucho de arroz, carne y verduras. Algunos feriados se celebran con fiestas. El fiesta más popular se celebran en la capital, La Paz. Se llama Carnaval De Oruro y ha celebrado más que dos mil años! ((Similar to Spanish and Mexican food, Bolivian food mainly consists of rice, beef and vegetables. Some of the holidays are celebrated with festivals. The most popular holiday is celebrated in the capital city, La Paz. It is called, Carnival of Oruro and it has been celebrated for over 2000 years!))
Adela Zamudio no sólo fue una poeta, sino una feminista. Comenzó el primer movimienta feminista de Bolivia. Ella expresó como los hombres son injustos a mujeres y se hizo muy famosa. En el once de Octubre Bolivia celebra el Día de Bolivianas mujeres, El cumpleaños de Adela. ((Adela Zamudio was a not only a poet, but a feminist. She started Bolivia’s first feminist movement. She expressed how men are unfair to women in her poems, and became very famous. She inspired others to join her campaign to spread awareness of feminism in Boliva. On October 11, Bolivia celebrates Day of Bolivian Women, Adela’s birthday))
Are you going to post it on here? If I have time I will look 
