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Corrections to a Spanish/English Paragraph. Appreciated.

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I would like my Spanish to be looked over. This is what I am trying to say in English and below is the Spanish. I appreciate it. ~Jessica

I am going to Madrid. I hear it is beautiful. First, I have to get my ticket . I think the plane is leaving on Monday at 11. My flight arrives at 6. Of course, I am going sit at in an aisle seat. I don’t like window seats, unless they are near a door. I have packed my suitcases. I am bringing my bathing suit, my sunglasses and I can’t forget my passport. Anything else? Security is going to be tough. But it’s okay. we will meet at the gate in Madrid. OK? See you soon.

Voy a Madrid. He oído que es hermosa. Primero, tengo que obtener mi billete. Creo que el avión sale el lunes a las once. Mi vuelo llega a las seis. Por supuesto, voy a sentarme en el asiento de pasillo. No me gustan asientos de ventanillas. Tengo listo mis maletas. Llevaré mi traje de baño, mis gafas de sol, y no olvido mi pasaporte. Algo más? Seguridad va a ser estricta. Pero, está bien. encontraremos a la puerta de embarque en Madrid. Vale? Hasta Luego.

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updated May 12, 2013
edited by jessicamccall117
posted by jessicamccall117
I edited per Kiwi's suggestions - jessicamccall117, May 3, 2013

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My suggestions wd be ...

I hear, he oído que ...

Airline ticket can be boleto or billete

Creo que el avión sale el lunes a las ...

Mi vuelo llega a las ...

Tengo listo mis maletas, He hecho las maletas .... There is also a verb for packing empacar ... He empacado ....

Llevaré mi traje ...

La seguridad va a ser estricta? Maybe, lol a native speaker is bound to come up with a better suggestion

gate(in an airport) puerta de embarque

updated May 3, 2013
posted by Kiwi-Girl
Thank you Kiwi!!! I think your suggestions are great!!!! - jessicamccall117, May 3, 2013
de nada :) - Kiwi-Girl, May 3, 2013