"I will be waiting for you"

Question

Pease, correct me this paragraph. Thanks.

      I will be waiting for you
      We will sit down in front of the sea
      and I will be able to walk with your hand
      and although all  my life pass, but I will wait for you
      I know in your  eyes there is still love   
      and your look says you will be back
      and although all  my life pass, but I will wait for you.

Answer 1

These are the changes I would make:

I will be waiting for you We will sit down in front of the sea and I will be able to walk with your hand in mine and though my life passes me by, I will wait for you I know in your eyes there is still love and your look says you will be back and though my life passes me by, I will wait for you.

nice job Grace :) - Kiwi-Girl, Apr 9, 2013

Well done. - katydew, Apr 9, 2013

Thanks ladies! :) - luisssito, Apr 10, 2013

Answer 2

¿Podrías escribir la frase "my life pass" en español? No sé exactamente lo que quieres decir. Aparte de eso, a mí me parece muy bien.

"...lo demás a mí me parece...", the spanish frase is: **y aunque se pase toda mi vida** - luisssito, Apr 10, 2013