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Havving a majro essay/test! please read over this paragraph on prefered holidays,, the english is below! please check for any errors and if it makes anysense!

Havving a majro essay/test! please read over this paragraph on prefered holidays,, the english is below! please check for any errors and if it makes anysense!

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updated Apr 8, 2013
edited by abdulahmed
posted by abdulahmed
what is your native language? - jessicamccall117, Apr 6, 2013
english, i am really struggling in spanish and have to learn the essay in less than two days!(yet ii havent even fully wrote it)! please help, i cant stress enough; please!!! - abdulahmed, Apr 6, 2013
english, i am really struggling in spanish and have to learn the essay in less than two days!(yet ii havent even fully wrote it)! please help, i cant stress enough; please!!! - abdulahmed, Apr 6, 2013
oj, and just so you know; i have put a lot of effort in this; i dont just ask others to do the work!!! - abdulahmed, Apr 6, 2013

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Hello Abdula,

If you have a major test, it's important that you are able to understand your mistakes. I'll point out the most important ones for you.

mis vacaciones consistiría (check conjugation, and what preposition do you need after consistir?)

Preferiría ir en unas vacaciones exóticas (preposition after ir?)

Vamos contrataríamos (only one verb must be conjugated)

un coche y visitamos (tense?)

un central comercial (??)

y veo un excelente centro cultural (tense?)

mis amigos y yo es para podemos a crear memorias (this one needs major changes)

para cuando nos sea mayor (the tense is correct. Check its agreement, and the pronoun)

updated Apr 6, 2013
edited by cogumela
posted by cogumela
Hola, Cogu:) - migelis, Apr 6, 2013
thank you sooooo much!!!!!!! thank you for all f your time an guidance, hwoever i am absolutely LOST on the adjustments!!! please could you further explain!!!! i am under a lot of pressure to complete the essay to a top mark aswell as learn it of by heart - abdulahmed, Apr 6, 2013
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Cogu helped you alot considering this is basically the same thing is cheating. If I were you I'd just take the very helpful information and TRY and go from there.

updated Apr 6, 2013
posted by jessicamccall117
were allowed t get help from anything/anyone thank you very much. - abdulahmed, Apr 6, 2013