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Can you check the grammar please?

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In this research i rely on many sources to conclude this project. I use a lot of internet links in order to get information related to this topic. Also,I try to links the information together in order to finalize this project and try to clear my ideas and clear my information at the final presentation.

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updated Mar 12, 2013
posted by likeG6

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I would probably put it in the past tense. In some places, I wasn't sure exactly what you were trying to say, so I made an educated guess.

In my research, I relied on many sources to complete this project. I used a lot of internet links in order to get information related to this topic. Also, I tried to link the information together in order to finalize this project, to clarify my ideas, and to present the information well for the final presentation.

updated Mar 12, 2013
posted by BigMike