How would you phrase this passage?

Question

One time I was walking through the woods. When I came to the end of the woods, there was a road that I came upon. Before I crossed, I looked both ways. There was nobody coming so I crossed.

Could someone tell me how you would phrase this passage?

Would this be a good way to phrase it?

Una vez yo andaba por el bosque. Cuándo llegué al fin del bosque, había una calle. Antes de que cruzara, miré a ambos lados. No venía nadie así que crucé.

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Answer 1

Ok....I will give it a try.

Una vez yo andaba por el bosque. Cuando llegué al fin del bosque,había una calle. Antes de que cruzara, miré a ambos lados. No venía nadie así que crucé.

How about that?

Answer 2

Please, let learners try to do their own work, they won't learn if they don't receive any feedback on their own attempts

Answer 3

It seems pretty good to me but of course I'm not a native.

Answer 4

Bush the way, if natives could answer this it would be the best.

Answer 5

Un día estaba caminando por el bosque. De repente llegue al fin del bosque y había una calle que me cruce. Antes, de cruzar volteé a los dos lados. No venia nadie de los lados y me cruce.