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Can anyone please check my grammar? thank you so much

Can anyone please check my grammar? thank you so much

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jj

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updated Mar 7, 2013
edited by Rabe
posted by Rabe

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I’m very thankful for your help and kindness. Honestly, I’ve never been to an Arab-American National Museum, nor have I ever had Arab food before. I have to admit that the food (looks or sounds) delicious! I’m truly blessed to have a chance to be able to go there and spend time with my teachers and friends. Without the help of transportation, I would not have had the opportunity to explore the Arab-American culture, history, and ancestory of those who did great things. I believe the more I understand about the ways of Arab culture, the better I will be able to communicate with Arab-Americans. The museum looks fantastic and I actually enjoyed watching the Arab dance and learning some Arabic words. Again thank you so much for your help and kindness. I could not have asked for anything more!

updated Mar 7, 2013
edited by BigMike
posted by rac1
Nice corrections, Annie! Bien hecho! - bandit51jd, Mar 5, 2013
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Why can't I say the food tastes good? I actually had the food there! -thanks

updated Mar 5, 2013
posted by Rabe
Because in the line above that you say, "nor have I ever had Arab food before." - rac1, Mar 5, 2013
I mean I've never had it before but when I went there I have it for the first time! so I was trying to sayd I've never been there and have arab food before. so I'm really appreciate of them for providing foods - Rabe, Mar 5, 2013
Or better, Say, "Before now, I had never been to an Arab-American National museum, nor had I tasted the food.....I must admit, the food was delicious..." - rac1, Mar 5, 2013
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I’ve never had an Arab
......nor have I ever had Arabian food......

and spent times with
....and spend time with.....

I believe the more I understand about the ways of Arab culture, are, the better I will be able to communicate with Arab Americans.

museum look fantastic
....museum looks fantastic....

patient and patient. (I think you wanted to use another descriptive adjective here?)

Really good good! Bien hecho!

updated Mar 5, 2013
edited by bandit51jd
posted by bandit51jd