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Could you correct this please?

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I was in the beach with my friend, we had a wonderful time. Fortunately none of the days we were there rained. You know, I think the reason why you don't like the beach as a vacation place it's because you live near one, you could go whenever you want, but in my case I feel lucky if I could go to the beach at least once a year. I really like it, the bad thing is that I don't like the places where there are many people.

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updated Mar 1, 2013
posted by gartic

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I would say:

I was at the beach with my friend; we had a wonderful time. Fortunately it didn't rain on any of the days that we were there. You know, I think the reason why you don't like the beach as a vacation spot is because you live near one. You can go whenever you want; in my case, I feel lucky if I can go to the beach at least once a year. I really like it. The bad thing is that I don't like beaches where there are many people.

updated Mar 4, 2013
posted by KerleneT
Thank you! - gartic, Feb 27, 2013