english project
I want to kwen if the following writting has mistakes 
Hello everybody,
tonight. I am going to present my Project about my trip to Cusco.
Eight years ago, for my graduation trip, i went to visit Cusco
I was very happy for the trip, was my first trip far Lima.
We went out a Thursday in the morning.
When we crossed the Andes, while we were traveling in bus, many friends started to feel wrong.
Luckily, we had some lemon candies and alcohol.
The teachers accompanied us on our trip to Cusco, and were with us all day long. They didn’t permit us to do anything.
Days before we left Cusco, we had free time to visit Cusco alone.
The city has changed since the Spanish conquest.
You can find different Spanish buildings and traditional parades about religion catholic. One day the archeologist Hiram Bingham found machu picchu
Many people have been visiting Cusco since then.
I remember that one day before we went to the disco in the night, we had a room for three or four people, my friends and me was playing when suddenly one piece of glass fell and then we were running the streets looking for a piece of glass.
We broke the door’s glass in our room,
Later before we went to the disco, we repaired the door.
When we arrived to Cusco i couldn’t find my camera,
Well, my friends lent me their cameras.
I collected all the photos.
I have wanted visiting Cusco again since this trip.
3 Answers
-a Thursday in the morning. should be: on a Thursday morning and no need to say out.. so we went on a Thursday morning -Days before we left Cusco, we had free time to visit Cusco alone. No need to repeat Cusco. You should replace it with the object pronoun " it " - my friends and me was playing. my friend and I ( subject pronoun) were not was. - one piece of glass fell. use a instead of one - we were running the streets looking for a piece of glass. We had to run to find another one instead the one we broke - and finally, I am looking forward to visiting it again
Here are my suggestions.
Hello everybody,
Tonight, I am going to present my project about my trip to Cusco.
Eight years ago, for my graduation trip, I went to visit Cusco
I was very happy, for it was my first trip from Lima.
We started out **on **a Thursday in the morning.
When we crossed the Andes, while we were traveling in bus, many friends started to feel wrong. (sick would be better)
Luckily, we had some lemon candies and alcohol.
The teachers accompanied us on our trip to Cusco, and were with us all day long. They didn’t permit us to do anything.
Days before we left Cusco, we had free time to visit Cusco alone.
The city has changed since the Spanish conquest.
You can find different Spanish buildings and traditional parades about the Catholic religion. One day the archeologist Hiram Bingham found Mstrong textachu **Picchu
Many people have been visiting Cusco since then.
I remember that one day before we went to the disco at night, we had a room for three or four people, and **my friends and **I were playing when suddenly one piece of glass fell, and then we were running inthe streets looking for a piece of glass.
We had broken the door’s glass in our room,
Later, before we went to the disco, we repaired the door.
When we arrived in Cusco i couldn’t find my camera,
Well, my friends lent me their cameras.
I collected all the photos.
I have wanted to visit Cusco again since this trip.
Very good effort. Congratulations. I wish I could this well in Spanish
Hi Jessylorena, Here would be a better way to write your story:
Hello everybody, Tonight, I am going to present my Project about my trip to Cusco. Eight years ago, for my graduation trip, I went to visit Cusco. I was very happy for the trip, because it was my first trip out of Lima. We went out on a Thursday morning. When we crossed the Andes traveling by bus, many of my friends started to feel sick. Luckily, we had some lemon candies and alcohol. The teachers accompanied us on our trip to Cusco, and were with us all day long. They didn’t permit us to do anything. A few days before we left Cusco, we had free time to visit Cusco alone. The city has changed since the Spanish conquest. You can find different Spanish buildings and traditional parades about religion catholic. One day the archeologist Hiram Bingham found machu picchu. Many people have been visiting Cusco since then. I remember that day before we went to the disco in the night. We had a room for three or four people, my friends and I were playing when suddenly a piece of glass fell. We ran through the streets looking for a piece of glass. We broke the door’s glass in our room. Later before we went to the disco, we repaired the door. When we arrived in Cusco, I couldn’t find my camera, so my friends lent me their cameras. I collected all the photos. I have been wanting to visit Cusco again after this trip.
