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Please can you help me with word order (syntax).

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I need help with sentence construction. The sentence is:

Nací en 1958 una media hora después mi gemelo hermano, Andre, nació.

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updated Feb 20, 2013
posted by 00a50c57

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I'm still learning too but your word order looks pretty good to me.

Could you post your English translation too please as it will make a difference if you want to say ... half and hour after (ie. later) my twin brother was born, or I was born ... half an hour after my brother was born.

If it's the second one then things will change and you will need 'que' after después )or you could put 'de que').

Nací en el año 1958 una media hora después de que nació mi gemelo hermano, Andre.

You will often see 'después de que' followed by the subjunctive but according to RAE if you're referring to a fact you should use the indicative. Here's the link if it's helpful but it's in Spanish. Apparently because 'antes de que' is always followed by the subjunctive, even if you're referring to facts in the past, many native speakers do the same with despues de que but this isn't necessary to be grammatically correct.

updated Feb 20, 2013
edited by Kiwi-Girl
posted by Kiwi-Girl
Thanks for your help. I have to write a biography for homework and it must be in the indefinido or preterito. So your sentence looks good. - 00a50c57, Feb 20, 2013
happy to help :) all the best with the homework - Kiwi-Girl, Feb 20, 2013
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I would say it like this:

"Nací en el año 1958 una media hora después de que naciera mi gemelo hermano, Andre."

updated Feb 20, 2013
edited by 005faa61
posted by 005faa61
jeje snap ;) - Kiwi-Girl, Feb 20, 2013
sorry JC i had left the page open and hadn't seen your answer - los genios ¿no? jeje - Kiwi-Girl, Feb 20, 2013
Thanks for your help. I have to write a biography using the indefinito/preterito. This is probably accurate but for my purposes, at this stage, I will just use the preterito. Thanks. - 00a50c57, Feb 20, 2013