Please help me with grammar mistakes.
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Presently, one of the circumstances that I’m having is failing in Math class. < This sentence doesn't sound natural, although it might gramatically work out. You could try, "Currently, a problem I am having is failing math class." Geometry is a very hard subject for me. In addition, it’s my least skilled subject. I still don’t understand the topics even though I pay a lot of attention to my math teacher while he is teaching. That's why sometimes I decided to do other assignments for different classes first after school and did not do my math homework because I always felt like I’m not going to know what I’m supposed to do on the assignments. < This sentence doesn't really flow too well; you could split it up into two sentences.
I cannot get straight A’s if I have an F in Geometry. In order to pass the class, I will have to fix my problem with one of several solutions. For instance, I will not miss any assignments and I will make sure to turn them in on time. I should pay more attention in the classroom and ask the teacher qustions if I’m confused with any topic. I will attend after-school tutoring to get help with my math homework. Knowing how to do the homework assignment is very important because once I understand the math, I will probably do well on the quizzes and tests. Better test scores will help me to pass the class. Staying after school will be another good habit as I could easily ask the teacher for help and complete assignments with the aid of other classmates.
By completing assignments and turning them in on time, as well as achieving better grades on test, my grade will hopefully improve. Showing perseverance while doing something is a key to be successful in the future. In order to attend the college I desire, I shall not have an F in my grades transcript. I truly believe that having good grades will allow me admission to a good college.
Great job on this! Most of the errors were minor and common. Keep up the good work! :D
Very helpful comments. A little picky maybe, but in fhe last paragraph, I would prefer "In order to attend the college of my choice, I must not have an F on my transcript."
