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Write a paragraph of at least six sentences. Use both verbs, ser and estar to talk about yourself or a friend.

I wrote: ¡Hola! Me llamo es Tyler. Soy de Philadelphia. Soy estudiante. Estoy en la escuela. Estoy muy bien. El nombre de mi amigo es Nate Viene de Virginia.

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updated Jan 13, 2013
posted by 45Shadow

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You've got the right idea! As long as it's okay for your assignment that you are writing simple sentences, then I would only have a couple suggestions.

¡Hola! Me llamo Tyler. Soy de Philadelphia. Soy estudiante. Estoy en la escuela. Estoy muy bien. El nombre de mi amigo es Nate. Él viene de Virginia.

"Me llamo es" is redundant because you are using two verbs "me llamo" and "es." It would be like saying "my name is is."

Adding "Él" and beginning a new sentence at the end clarifies who you are speaking about.

updated Jan 13, 2013
edited by unMica
posted by unMica