Proofread a message to my spanish girlfriend please
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Es el primero canción para que escribo letras. Espero que gusta.
It's the first song I ever wrote lyrics for. I hope you like it.
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updated Dec 13, 2012
posted by cgallo33
I am aware that I did not express the word "ever" in my attempt. I wasn't sure how to do so - cgallo33, Dec 13, 2012
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I would say:
Es la primera canción para la que escribí la letra. Espero que te guste.
updated Dec 14, 2012
posted by Cordobesa
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My attempt:
Es la primera canción que....(I'm not sure of the middle)....Espero que os guste.
updated Dec 13, 2012
posted by bandit51jd
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Es la primera canción para que escribo letras. Espero que te gusta.
Not sure about the "ever" part, am a beginner too. How about "para que he escrito letras"? It's a perfect tense, "that I have written lyrics for".
updated Dec 13, 2012
posted by suyash_d
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Es la primera canción en mi vida a la que le escribo una letra. Espero que te guste.
updated Dec 13, 2012
posted by Hokuten
