Can anyone check my work please. exam is tuesday!
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For this assignment we had to use the imperfect and preterite forms to tell of a time we got sick in the past and I still get really confused with the difference between the too and was hoping someone could tell me if I used the right ones in the right please please and thanks!
Una mañana me desperté con la gripe. Hice una cita con el médico. Mi mamá me llevó al hospital. Me sentía terrible. Tenía fiebre y dolor de cabeza. El doctor me examinó. Ella dijo, "tome líquidos, y quedarse en casa y descansar." Ella me dio una receta. Me tomó dos pastillas dos veces al día. Me sentí mejor después de una semana!
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updated Dec 3, 2012
posted by lcrespo15
"tomé" Also, your sentences are short and broken. You need to consolidate. - rac1, Dec 3, 2012
Welcome to the forum! - rac1, Dec 3, 2012
I agree about consolidating the sentences and fixing "tomó." Also the last sentence needs an upside exclamation point at the beginning I believe. - wrl1509, Dec 3, 2012
Thank you guys so much. I am trying to get by with the bare simple minimum that's why my sentences are so short! - lcrespo15, Dec 3, 2012
Thanks for posting this. I am revising these tenses and this will be a good exercise for me to do. Good luck. - 00a50c57, Dec 3, 2012
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y quédese en casa y descanse. No need to say Ella me dio. Just Me dio una receta.
Me tomé dos pastillas y me sentí mejor...
Good job!
updated Dec 3, 2012
posted by francobollo
