can someone help to correct this.. I'm learning english and I need to send this message
Hi krissita my dearest friend, I haven't talked to you in a while.. I don't want to be overwhelming on you.. I'd just like to say thank you for your love and care about me, I hope that you can understand some of my feelings, sometimes it might be confusing for you and I even for myself it's sort of confusing not to know what I am feeling inside.. I don't know how to describe it.. but I'm really thankful for all you've done for me so far, for listening when I needed to talk or cry, thank so much I really appreciate it..
You know that all this time is being tough on me, I didn't know what to do or what decision to make, what I'm trying to do now is waited and see how it works now that we've made some changes in our treatments, specially with cris, he seems different, he is more alert and responsive to others.
today we have a goodbye party for Richard, I'm not sure if I'm going or not, my back isn't doing great, I can't move really well, I can't stand up straight, I've been in pain for a couple of days, tomorrow i will go to the doctor I was thinking on going to the acupuncturist, we'll see how I feel tomorrow.
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thank you very much for msj..
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While there is room for grammatical improvement, yours is a very heartfelt and sincere letter. I am sure your friend Krissita will understand it perfectly. And best of all, it comes from you and your heart. If I were you, I would send it just like it is.
I hope you'll get better soon.
