Essay errors

Question

Here is the spanish version:

Para el desayuno, comer huevos. con desayuno bebo leche. Me gusta comer alimentos pequeños para el desayuno. Para el almuerzo voy a comer una ensalada con tomates. Puedo beber agua con mi ensalada.

Sorry! Here is the english. For breakfast I eat eggs. with breakfast I drink milk. I like to eat small foods for breakfast. For the lunch I will eat a salad with tomatos. I drink water with my salad. - Bardy, Nov 27, 2012

Hello, welcome to the forum! - rac1, Nov 27, 2012

Thanks! I really need help with spanish and i saw some very good answers on here. - Bardy, Nov 27, 2012

Answer 1

Hola Bardy,

This is my suggestion of how you should write the parragraph:

Para el desayuno quiero comer huevos y beber leche (or Voy a comer huevos y leche para el desayuno). Me gusta comer pocos alimentos (instead of alimentos pequeños - sounds weird- ) en el desayuno. Para el almuerzo voy a comer una ensalada de jitomates (instead of ensalada con tomates) y beber agua.

In Spanish, we don´t say "ensalada con...", we say "ensalada de..."

I´m from Mexico, so hope it helps

Thanks that helps alot! - Bardy, Nov 27, 2012