Emergencia! Ayuda con Preterito o Imperfecto
Por favor, mira la foto y correcta los verbos. D:! 
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Hi Megusta.. Here are my corrections to the pull down menu choices you've already made:
Estaba muy guapa. (A temporary condition... she looked beautiful, so use the imperfect)
Había mucha gente. (Temporary condition. Had you come at another time there could have been fewer people, hence the need for the imperfect)
En la entrada, un hombre vendía recuerdos y una mujer leía las manos (these were actions taking place at the precise moment of your visit, therefore the imperfect is required)
Durante el viaje conversamos mucho (you are no longer conversing, The trip is over. So, the preterite is required).
Cuando llegamos a casa (same reason).
Ya eran casi las diez.. (you are describing a moment in time)
Fue un día maravilloso (Era would be used if you were describing the weather you were having. But the logic of the story says you are summing up your day, so the action ended)
Lo pasamos muy bien juntas (again, the trip ended)