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updated Jan 2, 2013
edited by likeG6
posted by likeG6
Hello, welcome to the forum! - rac1, Nov 14, 2012
I would copy and paste the corrected one so as not to miss any punctuation corrections. - rac1, Nov 14, 2012
You did a fantastic job!! - rac1, Nov 14, 2012

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I have always loved traveling, but this was the first time I visited Malaysia. It was the best trip of my life. Actually I’m one of those people that don’t like to travel alone, so I went to Malaysia with my friends.

After arriving at Kuala Lumpur International Airport in Malaysia, I met my driver who took me to my hotel in the Sunway Lagoon Theme Park (Water Park). The Sunway Lagoon Theme Park is a famous theme park located at the Petaling Jaya area of Kuala Lumpur. It’s a great place for both kids and adults to play and have some fun. When I arrived at the hotel, I went to change my clothes and get some rest. Then I went with my friends to The Sunway Lagoon Theme Park (Water Park). There were many dangerous water games there, among these games there was a game known as, a (Water Toboggan). It was one of the most dangerous games there. The length was about 5 meters. I tried this game and found it to be very exciting and scary .There was a feeling of fear, but with a sense of enthusiasm and happiness. It was a great experience. I spent my first three days in that place. I was so happy there; it was like a dream come true.

After three days of having fun there, I went to Penang Island. It takes around two hours to get there by bus from Kuala Lumpur to Penang Island. It’s a nice place to relax and rest. It has beautiful natural landscapes. Everything around you seems green. It also has beautiful gardens and mountains that add to its scenic splendor. After that, I went to the amusement park known as (Genting Hailand). This wonderful city is located at the top of the heights (Genting Hailand) in the state of Bahnj, Malaysia. Its altitude is 2000 meters above sea level. When I entered the amusement park, I found many dangerous games there. Then I found a game where there was a crowd of people around. It's known as, Death Train. It attracted me and I wanted to try it. In this game the people under the age of 18 are not allowed to ride, so I went with my friends to ride this game. It rises to the top and then turns at a high speed. The people from below seem very small. I was screaming and laughing at the same time, It was both scary and happy. it was an indescribable feeling.

updated Nov 14, 2012
posted by rac1
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To be picky, both the original and the edited version tell me that the game, Water Toboggan, was 5M long or thereabouts when what they actually mean (I think) is that the toboggan was almost 5M in length.

Tell us more likeG6 such as how many people played and did you fall off. It's a great little story.

updated Nov 15, 2012
posted by geofc
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Actually I’m one of those people that doesn't like to travel alone, so I went to Malaysia with my friends.

updated Nov 15, 2012
posted by Sharstar25
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does anyone can help me please?

updated Nov 14, 2012
edited by likeG6
posted by likeG6