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How do you say this in english??

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Hola! I'm trying to translate a fragment of a text but I'm stuck at this sentence:

"Su mirada descansaba tristemente sobre todo y nada a la vez."

I think it'd be: Her gaze rested sadly above everything and nothing at the same time. Is this correct?

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updated Dec 8, 2012
posted by aileribel
Welcome to the Q&A forum! - --Mariana--, Nov 13, 2012
on everything.. Good! - annierats, Nov 13, 2012

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My opinion

Her gaze rested sadly upon everything and nothing at once.

updated Nov 13, 2012
posted by rac1
Thank you :) - aileribel, Nov 12, 2012
At the same time, is better, rac. - annierats, Nov 13, 2012
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I think that the translation of the sentence depend on the document subject, as known "Su" can be translated for many words so it can be (His,Her,Its,their or Your). So, this pharse as shown can be translated to:

  • His gaze rested sadly on everything and nothing at the same time. ( at the time )
  • Her gaze rested sadly on everything and nothing at the same time.
  • Their gaze rested sadly on everything and nothing at the same time.
  • Its gaze rested sadly on everything and nothing at the same time.

Also mirada can be translated to (Look), so the translation is become the same above but with replacing Gaze with look. so the sentence translation become

-( His,her,their,its) look rested sadly on everything and nothing at the same time. thanks for reading, i wish that will be enought

updated Dec 8, 2012
edited by asa_7929
posted by asa_7929
Muy observador. - -cae-, Dec 8, 2012
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Her gaze rested sadly upon all and naught at once / at one time?

I tried...

updated Nov 13, 2012
posted by cola_jet_set
I like it :) - Kiwi-Girl, Nov 13, 2012
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May I summarise.

We have no way of knowing from the snippet we're given what is the gender of the person performing this action. Let's just go with what the questioner says as he/she has read more of the book.

"Mirada" clearly translates to "gaze" here. "Gaze" is simply the best-fitting English word.

"Sobre" does not translate as "above" here; it is not appropriate so let's use "on".

Sorry Rac but I don't like "at once". It doesn't sound like English to my (English) ear so I go with "at the same time" although it too is a tad clumsy. I wish I could think of a good third option.

updated Nov 13, 2012
posted by geofc
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As Geofc says, I like....

"Her gaze rested sadly upon everything and nothing at the same time."

Still, I wish I could think of a smoother way to say "a la vez" here.

updated Nov 13, 2012
posted by --Mariana--
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According to the translator it reads: His gaze sadly rested above all and nothing at the same time.

I'm extremely new so I'm not sure how you might change it to read as "Her"? I assume with the -a ending instead -o it should refer to "her"?

updated Nov 12, 2012
posted by ZombieFish
The text talks about a girl, so it's Her i think. - aileribel, Nov 12, 2012
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Her gaze lay sadly upon everything and yet, at the same time, upon nothing.

updated Nov 13, 2012
edited by DonCiro
posted by DonCiro
Nice one. - geofc, Nov 13, 2012
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If you went with looked instead of gazed, 'a la vez' could be translated as 'in the same moment) ... (she) looked at everything and nothing all in the same moment. But it doesn't really work with gazed, which I do think is the best option.

updated Nov 13, 2012
posted by Kiwi-Girl
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Try 2.

Or why not try reconstructing the whole sentence? For example"

"Her sad gaze rested at once upon everything and nothing."

Not sure it has the same pizazz but I tried.

updated Nov 13, 2012
posted by geofc