Is this the correct translation? It is about CO2 emmisions.

Question

Is this the correct translation?

there is a lot of traffic which creates a lot of carbon dioxide that harms the ozone layer.

hay mucho tráfico que crea una gran cantidad de dióxido de carbono que daña la capa de ozono.

You do need to begin your sentences with capital letters. - rac1, Oct 21, 2012

Answer 1

hay mucho tráfico que crea una gran cantidad de dióxido de carbono que daña la capa de ozono.

Hay mucho tráfico, lo que crea una gran cantidad de dióxido de carbono que daña la capa de ozono.

hay mucho tráfico que crea una gran cantidad de dióxido de carbono, dañino para la capa de ozono.

Great edits, diagonx! - francobollo, Oct 21, 2012

Answer 2

It's correct, though carbon dioxide does not affect the ozone layer.

Answer 3

Reproduced from The Office of Oceanic and Atmospheric Research's website

Ozone is also a greenhouse gas in the upper atmosphere and, therefore, plays a role in Earth's climate. The increases in primary greenhouse gases, such as carbon dioxide, may affect how the ozone layer recovers in coming years. Understanding precisely how ozone abundances will change in a future with diminished chlorofluorocarbon emissions and increased emissions of greenhouse gases remains an important challenge for atmospheric scientists in NOAA and other research centers.

So there may be some truth about the effect on CO2 emssions on the ozone layer.

yup, but up there says "harms", not "affects its recovery" :P - comunacho, Oct 21, 2012

Bueno, es una cuestión de opiniones. Y yo respeto la tuya, comunacho. :-) - francobollo, Oct 21, 2012