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Would someone please tell me if this is right??

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I favorite meal is fried chicken with mashed potatoes. I like my potatoes with white gravy because I am a fatty! To go with the meal it needs some corn, coleslaw, and warm apple pie.

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Mi comida favorita es pollo frito y puré de papas. Me gusta mis papas con salsa Blanca porque soy un grasos! Para ir con la comida que necesita algunos maíz, ensalada de col y tarta de manzana tibia.

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updated Oct 18, 2012
edited by rac1
posted by hayleeh
Hi Hayleeh. Welcome to the forum! - rac1, Oct 18, 2012

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Mi comida favorita es pollo frito con puré de papas. ¡Me gustan mis papas con salsa Blanca porque soy un gordito/a! Para acompañar la comida necesito algunos maíces, ensalada de col y tarta tibia de manzana

I have changed some words, which you'll find in bold.

updated Nov 29, 2012
edited by Hokuten
posted by Hokuten