Proofreading for a great friend of mine :)
Any help will be greatly appreciated! Thanks you guys 
Happy Birthday Max! Feliz cumpleanos Max!
(Paragraph 1) I hope you have a great day with your friends and family. It was really nice seeing your mom, dad and brother this last week. We went wine tasting together and ran into another guy from Chile. I think it was nice for your parents to be able to speak Spanish with him. It was almost like I was back in Chile except you weren’t there.
(Paragraph 1) Espero que tienes un buen día con tus amigos y familia. Estuvo muy bien para ver tu padre, madre and hermano la semana pasado. Fuimos a aprobar vino y encontramos una persona de Chile. Creo que esta muy bien por tus padres a hablar con el. Pareció que estamos casi en Chile, excepto faltamos ti.
(Paragraph 2) What’s going on in Santiago? I posted pictures of my trip on Facebook and was reminded of what a good time I had with you. Thanks for spending so much time with me and showing me the way of Chile. Those are memories I will have for the rest of my life. Please tell Betto, Val, and Pisca I said what’s up.
(Paragraph 2) Como se va en Santiago? Pegue fotos en Facebook de mi viajar a Chile y recordé como bien el tiempo paso. Gracias por gastando mucho tiempo conmigo y mostrando la manera de Chile. Siempre tenga los memorias por todo mi vida. Por favor dile a Betto, Val, y Picas que pasa.
(Paragraph 3) Have you planned any trips outside of Chile? I decided that for my next vacation I want to meet up and travel with you. Let me know what your plans are after you finish school. There are still many good times that we can have together.
(Paragraph 3) Tenia planificado tu próxima viaje? Decidí que por mi próxima vacación querré viajar contigo. Dile a mi tu plan después de la universidad. Hay mas buen tiempos que podemos compartir.
(Paragraph 4) Two weeks ago I got promoted to manager. I now have ten people that work for me and control the wine club that has xxx people. I work for about 55 hours a week. Sometimes I wonder if this is the life I want to live. After traveling to Nicaragua and Chile I am use to more adventure. I’m lucky to have such an important job though.
(Paragraph 4) Hace dos semanas recibí un promoción a gerente. Al tiro tengo diez personas que están trabajando por mi y controlo el club de vino. Estaba trabajando 55 houras cada semana. A veces me pregunto si mi gusta eso en mi vida. En realidad estoy feliz para tener un muy importante position.
(Paragraph 5) Still I carry the stone you gave me every day to work. I keep it in my backpack and it’s a good reminder of how big and beautiful this world is. Last full moon I put it outside and it seems to be working great. Stay in contact brother.
(Paragraph 5) Todavia llevaba la piedra me das. Lo queda en mi mochila, me recuerda como grande y linda nuestro mundo esta. La ultimo luna llena puse afuera y funciona muy bien. Estamos en contacto hermano.
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Awesome writing... I wish I was as good as you
