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(My first trip to Malaysia)
I have always loved traveling, but this is my first time to visit Malaysia. It was the best trip of my life. It is a beautiful country. Actually I’m one of those people that don’t like to travel alone so, I got to go to Malaysia with my friends.
When I just arrived to Kuala Lumpur international airport in Malaysia I met my driver there and I went with him to my hotel in The Sunway Lagoon Theme Park (Water Park). The Sunway Lagoon Theme Park is a famous theme park located at the Petaling Jaya area of Kuala Lumpur. It’s a great place for the kids and adults to play and have some fun. I spent my first three days in that place I was so happy there it’s like a dream finally coming true.
After three days of having fun I went to Penang Island. It takes around two hours by bus from Kuala Lumpur to Penang Island. It’s a nice place for relaxing and take some rest. It has a beautiful nature landscapes. Everything around you seems green. It has a beautiful gardens and mountains to add to its scenic splendor. The weather was cold and rainy. The Shopping malls in this island were cheaper than Kuala Lumpur. The food was so amazing and delicious. It has a beautiful beach there. I took a boat trip around the island it takes about 3 hours. I spent two days there it’s was a wonderful island.
After that I went to Langkawi Island. It takes about one hour by airplane from Penang Island to Langkawi Island. I took a taxi from the airport to arrive me to my hotel. It was a wonderful hotel I had never seen. It was mad from the wood. It has a big beautiful swimming pall. The hotel was overlooking the sea. It was a small mall near from the hotel it was very cheap and beautiful.
It was a best a trip of my life. I spent four days in Langkawi Island and after that I go back to my country.
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I have always loved traveling, but this was the first time I visited Malaysia. It was the best trip of my life. It is a beautiful country. Actually I’m one of those people that don’t like to travel alone, so I went to Malaysia with my friends.
When I had just arrived at Kuala Lumpur International Airport in Malaysia I met my driver there and I went with him to my hotel in the Sunway Lagoon Theme Park (Water Park). The Sunway Lagoon Theme Park is a famous theme park located at the Petaling Jaya area of Kuala Lumpur. It’s a great place for both kids and adults to play and have some fun. I spent my first three days in that place. I was so happy there. It was like a dream come true.
After three days of having fun I went to Penang Island. It takes around two hours to get by bus from Kuala Lumpur to Penang Island. It’s a nice place to relax and rest. It has beautiful natural landscapes. Everything around you seems green. It has a beautiful gardens and mountains that add to its scenic splendor. The weather was cold and rainy. The shopping malls on this island were cheaper than the ones on Kuala Lumpur. The food was so amazing and delicious. There was also a beautiful beach there. I took a boat trip around the island, which took about 3 hours. I spent two days there. It was a wonderful island.
After that I went to Langkawi Island. It takes about one hour by airplane from Penang Island to Langkawi Island. I took a taxi from the airport to get to my hotel. It was a wonderful hotel I had never seen. It was built of wood. It has a big, beautiful swimming pool. The hotel was overlooking the sea. There was a small mall near from the hotel that was very cheap and beautiful.
It was the best a trip of my life. I spent four days in Langkawi Island and after that I went back to my country.
Excellent essay, LikeG6! Your trip sounds fabulous and your English is wonderful!
Thanks dude
