Would someone please check my paragraph? Thanks!
Hello! My name is Antjelica. I was born in Germany. I am tall, blonde, and strong. I love sports. My favorite sport is volleyball. I have a big family: four brothers and four sisters. My dad is strong and my mom is smart. I just became an aunt recently! I am in the ultimate year of secondary school. My favorite subject is probably strength and conditioning. However, I also like to write. I am going to graduate from Wilson in May and I will go to college to major in Pre-med.
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¡Hola! Me llamo Antjelica. Nací en Alemania. Soy alat, rubia, y fuerte. Me encanta hacer deporte. Mi deporte favorito es el voleibol. Tengo una familia grande: cuatro hermanos y cuatro hermanas. Mi padre es fuerte y mi madre es inteligente. Me convertí en una tía recientemente! Estoy en el último año de la escuela secundaria. Mi asignatura favorito es probablemente la educación física. Sin embargo, también me gusta escribir. Me graduaré de Wilson en mayo, y iré a la universitario y especializarse en preparado para ingresar en la Facultad de Medicina.
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Hiya, I'm not a native Spanish speaker so I'd wait for other comments but my suggestions would be:
alat - alta (just a typo)
asignatura favoritA
probablemente es (I'd just change the order of these 2 words but that may just be personal preference)
I guess phys. ed. is the same thing as strength and conditioning, the literal translation would perhaps be 'acondicionamiento físico y fuerza'
universidad para especializarse
preparatorio
If the word following "y" starts with "i-" or "hi-" then the word "y" becomes "e" . for example : Me graduaré de Wilson en mayo, e iré a la universidad.
