Can anyone please check it for me ? and correct it?
For this essay, I have to include both physical traits and character traits. I decided to write about my friend Hannah.
Hannah
My best friend Hannah is seventeen years old and lives in America.
Sadly, Hannah lost her mother when she was the age of eleven.
Nowadays, she's living with her father and two sisters.
Hannah is a straight A high school student. Almost everyone from school knows her to
be very intelligent, organized and hard-working. Her favorite subjects are Math and English. After high school, Hannah will go to college because she wants to become a doctor. She has wanted this since she was very young. Fortunately, she can speak two languages perfectly. Sometimes, she helps me with my Spanish homework or teach me some new words. I have to say she is very patient when helping someone.
Hannah has two cats as a pets. Their names are Sam and Molly. Hannah is of average height and weight. She has straight long blond hair and light brown eyes.
She loves musics as much as she loves to play sports, but soccer is the only sport that she plays the most all day long. She is capable of driving and drawing.
I am very lucky to have a friend like her because I know there are so many good things that I can learn from her. I also feel sorry for her losing her mom.
3 Answers
English does need to be capitalized but math does not.
...with my Spanish homework or teaches me...
...has two cats as pets ...
She loves music as...
I just posted again please go check it for me.
I don't know why, but the way this is posting, I can only see the first sentence. The last time you posted a paragraph, it was the same way.
