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Dear Abdul and Youssef!! I wrote this paragraph after I read a child from the desert book. In this book, the main character is Ali and I have to write a thank you letter to Abdul and Youssef being an Ali place.
I'm very thankful for your help and kindness. I couldn't have even imagined being all alone in the desert while I have been separated from my dad after the sandstorm. I was very lucky to met you and Youssef. Even though we are strangers, I'm very glad you invited me for a tea and being a great person for me, when I needed someone. It does mean a lot to me. Of course I thanked to Allah for giving me a chance to meet with a great family. I've learned so much from you, like when I looked at you I've seen how your a great person and very helpful. It made me wanted to help others too. Insallah one day, I will help others when they need my help. I also like listening the Warrior-tribesmen story. Again, Thank you so much to you and your grandson Youssef for a shelter, foods and a sweet mint tea. Plus, for letting me use the musket, so I could make the sound and it would be easy for dad to find me. I wish you all are healthy, have long life and always will be in my prayers.
From- Ali
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Dear Abdul and Youssef!!
I wrote this paragraph after I read a book called Child from the Desert.
I'm very thankful for your help and kindness. I couldn't have even imagined being all alone in the desert while being separated from my Dad after the sandstorm. I was very lucky to met you and Youssef. Even though we are strangers, I'm very glad that you invited me for a tea. You have been a great person to me when I needed someone. It means a lot to me. Of course, I give thanks to Allah for giving me a chance to meet such a great family.
I've learned so much from you-- like when I looked at you and I saw that you're a great person and very helpful. It made me wantto help others too. Insallah one day, I will help others when they need my help. I also liked listening to the Warrior-tribesmen story.
Again, Thank you so much and thanks to your grandson, Youssef, for shelter, food, and a sweet mint tea. I also thank you for letting me use the musket, so I could make the soundwhich made it easy for my Dad to find me. I wish you all health and long life. You will always be in my prayers.
From- Ali
Hi, Rabe!! Just a few suggestions:
I'm very thankful for your help and kindness. I couldn't have even imagined being all alone in the desert while I have been separated from my dad after the sandstorm. I was very lucky to meet (or have met) you and Youssef. Even though we are strangers, I'm very glad you invited me for a tea and for your being (or that you were/are a...) a great person for me (No comma needed) when I needed someone. It does mean a lot to me. Of course I thanked Allah for giving me a chance to meet with such a great family. I've learned so much from you; when I looked at you I saw that you're a great person and very helpful. It made me want to help others, too. One day, I will help others when they need my help. I also like listening to the Warrior-tribesmen story. Again, thank you so much to you and your grandson Youssef for the shelter, food, and (no 'a' needed) sweet mint tea. Thank you also for letting me use the musket, so I could make noise and it would be easy for dad to find me. I hope you all stay healthy and have a long life and you will always be in my prayers.
Overall, great essay! Keep up the good work!! 
Thank you so much to both of you. It help me a lot by seeing the mistakes that I've made. I hope I did much better than this next time.
