Help me to correct this exercice (English)....please

Question

In the weekend, I went to the cinema with my four friends. Joan and Christian wanted to see a horror movie wich it titled " Haunted House" and Maria and I wanted to see a movie title " The histories in the school, because we had heard that it was very funny. And the end, Maria and I convinced them to see the movie " The histories in the school". The film lasted two hours and it was about the life of eight students in the school and the parties that they had every Thursday. When we left to the cinema, we told about it and all of us said the same "the movie had been boring"

Answer 1

On the weekend, I went to the cinema with my four friends. Joan and Christian wanted to see a horror movie which was titled " Haunted House," and Maria and I wanted to see a movie titled " The Histories in the School,-" because we had heard that it was very funny. In the end, Maria and I convinced them to see the movie called " The Histories in the School". The film lasted two hours and it was about the life of eight students in the school and the parties that they had every Thursday. When we left the cinema, we discussed it and all of us said the same: "The movie was boring."

Good job, Nakira! - --Mariana--, Sep 27, 2012

Muchas gracias Mariana por tu ayuda... todavia tengo mucho que mejorar!!! - nakira4, Sep 27, 2012

Nakira, I think you should begin with, "Over the weekend," I went..." Since the rest of it is in a past tense, this has more of a past tense feel. "On the weekend" kind of leaves that more open to on any given weekend. "Last weekend" would work too. - rheit, Sep 30, 2012

Answer 2

movie witch was titled => movie which was titled or skip the "which was": "movie titled"