Proof Reading for Family

Question

You are going to come! I have already saved a room for you (bed & breakfast room that they already know about). If you want to stay for two nights let me know. Paul owns it so it's free. See you soon!

Van a venir! Ya tengo guardarle un dormitorio para ti. Si quieres quedar por dos noches digame. Paul esta el dueno, por eso, esta gratis. Nos vemos pronto

Answer 1

Here´s my attempt:

First Sentence: should have an exclamation mark at the beginning ¡Van a venir!

Second sentence guardarle should be guardar because you go on to say "para ti".

Third sentence You are addressing more than one person so many of the pronouns and verbs need to be in the plural form

• para ti should be plural i.e. para vosotros

• "digame" becomes "me dicen", if it was singular it should be in the informal "me digas"

• quires becomes quieren

quedar is a reflexive verb so becomes quedarnos

Si quieren quedarnos dos noches me dicen

I can´t find any problems with the last two sentences

I hope that helps a little.

Please see my corrections. :-) - --Mariana--, Sep 22, 2012

Answer 2

Ya tengo guardarle un dormitorio para ti.

If you have more than one person in the group I think this would be better:

Ya os he guardado una habitación.

Or If it's just one person:

Ya te he guard ado una habitation.

Answer 3

If you are talking to one person.....

¡Vas a venir! Ya guardé un dormitorio para ti. Si quieres quedarte por dos noches solo dime. Paul es el dueno, por eso, es gratis. ¡Nos vemos pronto!

If you are talking to more than one person.....

¡Van a venir! Ya guardé un dormitorio para ustedes. Si quieren quedarse por dos noches solo dime. Paul es el dueno, por eso, es gratis. ¡Nos vemos pronto!

Answer 4

Thanks for the help!