Is this Spanish sentence written correctly…

Question

Mi mejor amiga se llama Claire Jones, es alta y delgada. Claire es muy bonita y tiene el pelo rizado y rojo. ella gusta llevar su mini falda blanca en todás pates?

Answer 1

Great try, you just missed an 'a' and a 'le' from the phrase:

a ella, le gusta llevar (puesto) un minifalda blanca ...

The 'a ella' is optional but the phrase means: To her it is pleaseing to wear a (or her is understood) white miniskirt.

and for the last bit did you want to say 'everywhere'?

if so then it would be 'por todas partes'

Se mira que haces tu tarea en spanish!!Bien hecho. - sgarcia3, Sep 18, 2012

Je je gracias señor :) - Kiwi-Girl, Sep 18, 2012

Answer 2

I'll let better speakers help out more, but will contribute a bit for starters.

1, You have to capitalize the starts of sentences.

2, es alta y delgada is probably a stand alone sentence.

3, 'ella gusta' should be either 'le gusta' or 'a ella le gusta'

4, todas or todos, but not todás, depending on what pates is.

5, I don´t know what pates is.

There´s some initial food for thought anyway. Looks pretty good overall.

enjoy roger

Heyyy.Exelente explicacion!!!! - sgarcia3, Sep 18, 2012

Well done Rog :) - Kiwi-Girl, Sep 18, 2012