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Please fix this one paragraph for me . it's important for me

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  Fortunately, once we know how to speak English pretty well and understand about the American culture or once we made friends and know about the technologies. America is just perfect! As much as we hate it at first, but now we totally in love with the America.I still want to go back to Thailand just for a visit, not to live there for the rest of my life because I know there are more steps that I need to step up for to reach my goal. Since neither my father nor my mother were not able to graduated from college, so had to work very laborious jobs. I know they will never want me to go through what they did. I'm very glad that how my family still celebrate our own culture celebration even though we are facing another totally different culture. The most important part was not forgetting our own language, which is Burmese. I know my English is not perfect, but being able to communicate with others in English was one of the greatest accomplishments for my life. I have to admit that the scary moments that we had before are just a joke for us now. Sometimes I would laugh out loud when I think about those embarrassing moments.
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updated Sep 2, 2012
posted by Rabe

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Rabe, this looks like you put this into a machine translation!

updated Sep 2, 2012
posted by --Mariana--