Could you help me please. Is it correct?
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Could you review my homework, please?
A. Can i speak to Carl, please?
B. I'm sorry. He's ON his break.
A. Hi. are Lisa and Tom there?
B. Yes, but THEY can't come to the phone - they're AT the yard.
A. Hi. Is Beth in, please?
B. No, she's AT the mall. Do you want to leave HER a message?
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updated Jun 14, 2012
posted by _kib
Remember that the word " I " is capitalized in English. - --Mariana--, Jun 14, 2012
Gracias Mariana por la correccion pero creo que debiste haberme ayudado tambien. - _kib, Jun 14, 2012
2 Answers
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It's good! Except instead of "at the yard" it could be "in the yard." That depends on context, though.
Good work!
updated Jun 14, 2012
posted by unMica
Thanks a lot!! - _kib, Jun 14, 2012
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A. ¿Puedo hablar con Carl,por favor? B.Lo siento,esta en su descanzo.
A.¡Hola! Estan Lisa y Tom ahí? B.Si,pero no pueden contestar el telefono- Estan en el patio.
A.Hola, ¿está Beth? B:¡No! Está en el centro comercial. ¿Quieres dejarle un mensaje?
updated Jun 14, 2012
posted by El_Mexicalense
I think he wanted the English checked. He is a native Spanish speaker. - Eddy, Jun 14, 2012
You're right Eddy. - _kib, Jun 14, 2012
