Please, help me to correct this exercise (English)

Question

Please, help me to correct this exercise. Thanks

*Exercise: You have returned from a week´s holiday staying at the home of your British friend, Sam. Write a card to your friend. In your card, you should:

• tell Sam you journey back to your home

• say what you enjoyed most about your stay

• ask Sam to visit you*

Dear Sam, How are you? I am writing for telling you that I am already at my home after two hours journey . I enjoyed most with you visiting museums, parks, shops and took walk all around at London. When will you visit me? I hope you come soon.

I am looking foward to hearing from you

take care

Answer 1

You did a great job on this! Here are a few corrections:

Dear Sam,

How are you? I am writing to tell you that I am already ----- home after a two- hour journey . What I enjoyed most with you was visiting museums, parks, and shops and when we took a walk all around --- London. When will you visit me? I hope you come soon.

I am looking foward to hearing from you.(period)

take care,(comma)

Muchas gracias Mariana por tu ayuda!!!! :)) - Paiper, May 31, 2012