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Another English to Spanish translation. Otra traducción de inglés a español.
Like the others, I am using vosotros form and Spain Spanish. Como los demás, uso forma de vosotros y español de España
I don´t need help with the grammar in the English part. No necesito ayuda con la gramática de la parte inglés.
Thank you for your help! ¡Gracias por tu ayuda!
Dear Julia and Jose, Thank you so much for the jewelry. I wasn’t expecting a gift, but these little things will remind me of you and my time here in Spain. I can’t wait to show them to my friends. Thank you both very much for inviting me to your home. Spending so much time with you and your family made me feel like part of the family. Jose, I am sorry I didn´t have a chance to try a piece of your famous tortilla. When I come back to Spain, I´ll be sure to have some, I promise. I appreciate all the times you gave me rides to work. Thank you for that. Julia, thank you so much for being like a friend to me. I always enjoyed our conversations at the school while picking the girls’ up as well as at all the meals we’ve shared together. I can´t believe that during my first few weeks here, you were telling your friends about the baby for the first time. Now, you are a week away from giving birth. My, how time has flown! You have to send me a photo of Tina when she is born. I hope to keep in touch with everyone, and I also hope to visit soon.
Queridos Julia y José, Muchas gracias por la bisutería. No esperaba un regalo, pero estas cositas me recordarán de vosotros y mi estancia aquí en España. Tengo ganas de mostrarlas a mis amigas. Muchísimas gracias a vosotros dos por invitarme tantas veces a vuestra casa. Pasar tanto rato con vosotros y vuestra familia hizo que me sentaba parte de la familia. José, lo siento que no podía probar un trozo de tu tortilla famosa. Cuando vuelva a España, la tomaré, te prometo. Te agradezco que me conducías a trabajar. Gracias por eso. Julia, gracias por ser como mi amiga. Siempre gozaba nuestras conversaciones en el cole esperando a las niñas así como en todas las comidas que hemos compartido. No me puedo creer que durante mis primeras semanas aquí, dijiste a tus amigas que estabas embarazada. Ahora, ¡te queda casi una semana! Ay, ¡cómo pasa el tiempo! Hay que mandarme una foto de Tina cuando nazca. Quiero mantenerme en contacto con todos, y espero que os puedo visitar pronto.
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This is really good! I just found a few things, and maybe a couple more, but I'm not sure. Here's a few that I'm sure about: where you said in the fourth line "hizo que me sentaba" it should be using the verb "sentir" instead of "sentar" and it should be "me hizo sentir" or "hizo que me sintiera" with the imperfect subjunctive. I think it would be better to say "te lo prometo" in the 5th and 6th line because you'd be referring to a certain thing that you're promising him. "Te agradezco que me conducías a trabajar" could probably be changed to "te agradezco por conducirme al trabajo" if you mean that the person drives you to work. In your very last sentence, it should actually be more like "espero poder visitaros pronto." Great job! 
Sounds good to me!
