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Question

There are many causes and effects of climate change. In this essay I will write about the causes and effects of climate change.

First I will write about major causes of climate change. The first cause of climate change is Human Activity and Greenhouse Gases. People are changing the climate with actions that create emissions of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide and methane. Energy that used in the home, driving and air travel are some of the actions that caused by humans. Furthermore Natural causes are also reason of climate change such as volcanoes, ocean currents and the earth's tilt. In addition Continental drift is also cause of climate change. Moreover global warming is also considered one of the reasons of climate change.

Climate change has already had observable effects on the environment. First affect of climate change is changes in temperature. Scientists have high confidence that global temperatures will continue to rise for decades. Another reason for climate change is Melting Glacial Ice. Ice on rivers and lakes is breaking up earlier. Furthermore decrease the availability of freshwater is also an affect of climate change. Moreover increased flooding is also a result of climate change.

In conclusion, we can Prevent Climate Change by some ways, for example turn off the electronic devices when not in use, drive less and Fly less. Those ways help us to stop Climate Change.

I have moved this to the proofreading section. Did you want this in Spanish as well? - rac1, May 20, 2012

Answer 1

There are many causes of global warming can produce climate change. In this essay I will write about the ways that global warming causes climate change. Then I will mention a few changes we humans could make in our behaviors to reduce global warming and therefore slow down climate change.

• First I will write about major causes of global warming. A major cause of global warming is human activity which, in a variety of ways, produces greenhouse gases. People warm the atmosphere by engaging in activities that produce emissions of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide and methane. These activities include heating and cooling homes, all forms of human transportation, and manufacturing. Additionally, there are some natural causes for global warming, including volcanoes, ocean currents and the earth's tilt. Continental drift also may contribute to this, but at a much slower pace than what we are experiencing now. The major dangerous effect of global warming is climate change, which includes changes in average temperatures of the oceans and the atmosphere, precipitation amounts, and the number of storms and droughts.

• Climate change has already had observable effects on the environment. Temperatures of the air and water are increasing. Scientists have high confidence that global temperatures will continue to rise for decades. Another effect of climate change is melting glacial ice. Ice on rivers and lakes is breaking up earlier. This decreases the availability of fresh water. Climate change can also be seen in the increased incidence of floods and droughts.

• In conclusion, we humans can slow down climate change by changing our behaviors. For example, we could turn off electric devices when not in use, drive less, and fly less. We could produce the energy that we need by using wind and solar resources and stop burning fossil fuels. Reducing emissions of fossil fuels means less global warming and less climate change.

I was attempting to just use minimal corrections here so that he can learn to do the rest on his own. It looks like you have rewritten it. - rac1, May 20, 2012

It does look that way. :-) - babs_irish, May 21, 2012

Answer 2

First, I will write about major causes of climate change. The first cause of climate change is human activity and greenhouse gases. People are changing the climate with actions that create emissions of greenhouse gases, like carbon dioxide and methane. Energy that is used in the home, driving and air travel are some of the actions that are caused by humans. Furthermore, natural causes are also a reason for climate change, such as volcanoes, ocean currents and the earth's tilt. In addition, continental drift is also a cause of climate change. Moreover, global warming is also considered one of the reasons for climate change.

Climate change has already had observable effects on the environment. The first effects of climate changes are changes in temperature. Scientists believe that global temperatures will continue to rise for decades. Another reason for climate change is melting glacial Ice. Ice on rivers and lakes is breaking up at a much faster rate. Decreased availability of freshwater and increased. flooding is also a result of climate change.

In conclusion, we can prevent climate change in certain ways, for example, turn off the electronic devices when not in use, drive less and fly less. These are some ways that help us to prvent climate change.