Wedding Phrase

Question

I am writing a bilingual wedding invitation. Here is the wording in English:

John Smith and Jane Smith

request the honour of your presence

at the Nuptial Mass uniting their daughter

Susy Smith and

Jose Ortiz in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony the fourth of August two thousand and twelve at half past two in the afternoon

Here is my attempt at the translation:

John Smith y Jane Smith se complacen en invitarle a la misa nupcial queunirá a su hija

Susy Smith and Jose Ortiz en el sacramentomatrimonial Sábado, cuatro de Agosto dos mil doce a las dos y media de latarde

I would appreciate any help you give me.

Thanks.

Answer 1

John Smith y Jane Smith se complacen en invitarle a la misa nupcial que unirá a su hija Susy Smith and Jose Ortiz en el sacramento matrimonial el Sábado, cuatro de Agosto de dos mil doce, a las dos y media de la tarde