A joke / Un chiste

Question

Please, could you check if I translated this correctly? Thank you very much.

Two man are talking to each other / Dos hombres están hablando:

Hombre 1: A qué estás trabajando? Hombre 2: Estoy llenando el intervalo ausente en mi Facebook con las informaciones falsas y las imágenes arregladas.

Hombre 1: Qué? Hombre 2: Sí, debría ver mis fotos cuando era un bebé y fui criado por un grupo de lobos. Y aquí está una foto de mí en el año 1976 en conjunto de la Guerra de las Galaxias, abrazando Chewbacca.

Hombre 1: Pero no puedes confundir la línea del tiempo. Socavarás todo lo que Facebook está tratando de hacer con nuestras informaciones. Hombre 2 : ¡Bingo!

Hombre 1: ¡Me encanta a foto de tú trabajando con Einstein! ¡Debiese sido esptuendo ser el niño el más inteligente en América! he he Hombre 2: ¡Y, guauu, sobrevivías el hundimiento de Titánico! ¡Oye! ¡No me había dado cuenta de que ayudabas a salvar Apollo 13! he he

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Man1: What are you working on? Man2: I am filling in my Facebook timeline with fake information and photoshopped pictures.

Man1: What? Man2: Yeah, you should see my baby pictures from when I was raised by a pack of wolves. And here is one of me in 1976 on the set of Star Wars hugging Chewbacca.

Man1: But you can not mess with the timeline! That will undermine everything Facebook is trying to do with your information. Man2: Bingo!

Man1: I love the pictures of you working with Einstein! It must have been neat being America´s smartest toddler! ha ha Man2: And wow, you survived the sinking of the Titanic! Hey! I did not realize you helped save Apollo 13!

I am sure I made too many mistakes. That is why, in case you have time to corret them, I would be really happy if you corrected this my post. - iana01, May 3, 2012

Muchas gracias de antemano. - iana01, May 3, 2012

Answer 1

I like the facebook joke

Thanks, Ray_Misterio. Aw, jejejej, where did you find this picture? I can not stop laughing. jejeejejj, :))))))))))))))))) - iana01, May 4, 2012

Answer 2

Falsebook

:))) - iana01, May 3, 2012

Answer 3

jejejeje, good story, amiga! ¡Muchas gracias por hacerme reír!

Silvy, thanks, amigaaaa!! :)) - iana01, May 3, 2012

No hay de que! Es un verdadero placer!;)) - Silvia_Tcherneva, May 3, 2012

Answer 4

¡Qué chistoso! Y sí que nunca se puede tomar nada demasiado en serio de lo que se ve en Facebook...

That's funny! And yeah, you can't take anything you see on Facebook too seriously...

Yes, that is the message. Not to take things on the internet too seriously. ;)) Thanks, Pumpkin. )) - iana01, May 3, 2012

Answer 5

Good post! I'm going on facebook now to "adjust" my timeline!

Holaaaaa Noetol :))) Ok. jejejejejjjjj. A good idea. jejjejejjjj. You are funny. :))) - iana01, May 4, 2012

Hey - you're the one with the great joke! ;))) - Noetol, May 4, 2012

;) - iana01, May 4, 2012

Answer 6

Haha, good one amiga! )))

hi, amigaaaaa :))))) - iana01, May 3, 2012

helloooo my dear friend!! :))))) - 00cdfbd9, May 3, 2012

Answer 7

I am sure I made too many mistakes. That is why, in case you have time to corret them, I would be really happy if you corrected this my post

Another possible word order:

I am sure I have made too many mistakes. If you have time, I would be really happy if someone corrected my post.

Your first sentence indicates you know you have mistakes, so "that is why" is not needed. I hope this helps and your English between Man 1 and Man 2 is great!

hola Bandit, thanks. :) - iana01, May 3, 2012