Please proofread Spanish project...
This is for a school project. Please correct it for me and many thanks in advance.
Some people think of abortion as a simple eliminating of a "burden", perhaps it was an "accident" that the child was conceived in the first place, but if that were true, then what did that couple think could happen from "it"?
People become angry when they are told that abortion is murder. Why? Because they know there is nothing else you can call it! It's a killing of "something", a child! A little, innocent baby that only wanted a chance at life, just like it's mama and daddy had. They had a chance at life and they screwed it up. In the end, they are as miserable as the baby was. Enduring the anguish of being torn apart and to make it worse, torn apart and left behind because no one cared.
Is that how people think of life? Something to be tossed away without a second thought? And that brings me to another point. How the mothers feel after they leave the clinic, knowing they have just killed their baby. Their own flesh and blood. They suffer horrifically afterward. And I feel sorry for them, but I can't help but feel angry at the same time. They did not think of their child. They thought of themselves the whole time. Is that what love is? A moment in the dark and six months later, cold white walls of a clinic that say they are killing the baby for the mother's good. Possibly for the baby's good. Sick is what it is.
I am very aware that victims of rape who become pregnant often want to abort it because it is too painful to see the baby of their rapist. You can think I'm harsh, but I know what it is like in their position and if I had become pregnant, I would have kept the child. What better sacrifice then to fight for something good? An innocent little child is STILL an innocent little child no matter the father or mother. It wasn't the child's fault that it was conceived in such a violent fashion. Why kill the baby for something it did not do?
From a seventeen year old future military recruit.
Spanish version needs much work I know!
Algunas personas creo de aborto es simple eliminación de una "carga", quizas es fue un "accidente" que el niño fue concebido en primer lugar, pero si eso fuera verdad, entonces, por qué hizo la pareja "lo hacen" en primer lugar?
La gente convertirse enojado cuándo están dijo eso aborto es asesinato. Por qué? Porque ellos saben eso no hay nada otro a llamarlo. Es una asesinato de un niño! Una pequeño, inocente niño eso solamente quise un oportunidad de vida, como es madre y padre tuve. Ellos tenían una posibilidad en la vida, pero ellos la estropearon lo. Al final, eran casi tan miserables como el bebé. Soportar la angustia de ser desgarrado, el silencioso grito, y para que sea lo que es peor, es todo porque nadie se preocupaba.
Es eso cómo la gente pensar sobre la vida? Algo ser arrojó lejos sin un segundo pensamiento? Y eso me lleva al segundo punto. Cómo el madres sentir cuándo ellos salir el clínica, después de matar a su propio bebé. Sus propia carne y sangre. Yo no puedo sino sentir lástima por ellos, pero me siento enojado al mismo tiempo. Ellos no piensan de sus hijo. Pensaban de sí mismos todo el tiempo. Es eso qué amor es? Un momento en la oscuridad y seis meses más tarde, las frías paredes blancas de una clínica de aborto.
Soy muy consciente de que las víctimas de violación que quedan embarazadas a menudo quieren el niño aborta porque es demasiado doloroso ver al bebé de su violador. Usted puede pensar que soy dura, pero sé que es como ser en eso situación, y si tuve embarazada, yo habría mantenido al bebé. Qué mejor sacrificar entonces para luchar por algo bueno? Un niño inocente es todavía un niño inocente no importa el padre o la madre. No es culpa del niño quién fue concebido de manera violenta. ¿Por qué matan al bebé por algo que esto no hizo?
De un recluta militar futuro diecisiete año de edad.
Muchas gracias a todos.
4 Answers
Dare7,
I would like to point out I've removed algdnz's inappropriate comment and I apologize that someone couldn't show a little respect for your school project you've submitted for revisement. I hope it won't discourage you from posting in the future again, we don't support abusive speech. 
Saludos,
DJ ((( d(-_-)b )))
BTW: ¡Bievenido al Span¡shD!ct amiga! 
Hi Dare,
I think perhaps it is too depressing for this kind of a site. But I'm not sure. I agree with most of what you said and I don't think I wasted my time.
Good job. Just remember that the world isn't perfect and sometimes taking the time to write things kinds of things do no good anyway.
My negative outlook anyway....
Kat
P.S.
Bienvenida al foro.
@Algdnz - I made you waste your time? You didn't have to read it. You didn't have to say anything. I wouldn't have cared. But I put the time and effort into writing this. You did not. And who said anything about it being new? Not me. You got some sort of problem with acknowledging a job well done, at least I hope it was well done.
Next time don't say anything at all if you can't say anything nice. And yeah, some humans are caring.
Thanks for the fantastic welcome to this site.... nice to have not one single person say "welcome".
Sincerely,
Dare
A little civility would be nice algdnz!
