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Hola, estoy escribiendo una carta a una familia en la Republica Dominicana que va a permitirme vivir con ustedes este verano. Hay alguien que pueda leer esta y corregir la español? Gracias!
Hola, estoy emocionada conocer a ustedes, y gracias por me permiten estar en su casa. Me llamo Jessica, y tengo diecisiete años. Estoy en mi tercer año a la universidad, y estoy estudiando biología. Cuando yo gradúe, quiero entrar en la facultad de medicina. También, estudio Latinoamérica, y este es el razón que quiero viajar a la Republica Dominicana. He viajado a Guatemala y Cuba también. Vivo en Los Estados Unidos en Virginia que está muy cerca de la capital. Vivo con mi madre, padre, y dos hermanos mayores. Soy Católica, y la religión es muy importante para mí. Paso el mejor de mi tiempo estudiando, pero quiero mucho enterármeles y pasar tiempo con ustedes en su vida diaria.
English: Hello, I am very excited to meet you, and thank you for letting me stay in your home. My name is Jessica and I am 17. I’m currently in my third year of college studying Biology, and I hope to go to medical school when I graduate. I am also studying Latin American studies, which is why I wanted to come on this trip. I have also been to Guatemala and Cuba. I live in the United State in Virginia which is very close to the capital. I live with my mother, father, two older brothers. I am Catholic, and religion is very important to me. I spend most of my time studying, but I would really like to get to know your family and spend time with you in your daily life.
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Hola Jessica,
It´s great that you´re going to the Dominican Republic. I was there last summer and there´s a lot to love. 
You´ll really enjoy it. If you would like, I will help you correct some small errors, but everything you said gets your point across. I recommend sending it as is because you want them to know what your true level of Spanish is--that way they´ll know how to help you improve. Consider, and let me know if you still want to change it.
