Check this homework please.

Question

Been asked in class for my homework to write about things to do in a place, your favourite thing to do , what time it opens and closes and the best month to go. I have written.

" Londres es una cuidad grande, concurrida y ruidosa. Hay muchos restaurantes, varios museos y varios parques. Hay un palacio que se llama Buckingham Palace. Prefiero el teatro. El teatro abre a las 7.00 y cierra a las 11.00. Es más o menos tranquila en enero."

Answer 1

The only mistake I see is with the spelling of 'parques.'

Answer 2

Also, "Es más o menos tranquila en enero" is directly after the 2 sentences about the theatre. I think you are referring to London because of "tranquila" rather than "tranquilo," but I would still say "Londres es tranquila ......." just to avoid confusion.

Answer 3

i agree with both jjulian and kim

Answer 4

Thank you