Is this phrase correct?

Question

Díos conceder mí el serenidad a aceptar el cosas no podemos cambio, tener el coraje a cambio el cosas podemos, y el sabiduría a sabe la diferencia.

God grant me the serenity to accept the things we cannot change, have the courage to change the things we can, and the wisdom to know the difference.

AA Serenity Prayer

I'm putting this one on my wall....

Very beautiful, thanks for sharing this was us. To me t here is nothing more beautiful than to hear prayers in espanol. - pmikan-pam, Apr 17, 2012

Yes, I'm not extremely religious but I certainly believe in prayer. Especially when dealing with addictions. - 00cdfbd9, Apr 17, 2012

And you're welcome. :) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 17, 2012

Beautiful, Kat, amiguita!! I voted for you! :)) - iana01, Apr 18, 2012

Gracias, mi querido amiga!!!!! :)))) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 18, 2012

Answer 1

KatRJ - I found two Spanish versions, one short and one full length. The short version in Spanish was a gif.

Here is the full version that I found.

Dios, concédeme la serenidad para aceptar las cosas que no puedo cambiar, el valor para cambiar las cosas que puedo cambiar y la sabiduría para conocer la diferencia; viviendo un día a la vez, disfrutando un momento a la vez; aceptando las adversidades como un camino hacia la paz; pidiendo, como lo hizo Dios, en este mundo pecador tal y como es, y no como me gustaría que fuera; creyendo que Tú harás que todas las cosas estén bien si yo me entrego a Tu voluntad; de modo que pueda ser razonablemente feliz en esta vida e increíblemente feliz Contigo en la siguiente. Amen.

As you know my Spanish lessons have just begun recently, so you will have to decide if the translations are correct.

Cheers!

Gracias, amiga! - 00cdfbd9, Apr 17, 2012

De nada! My pleasure! - 0095ca4c, Apr 17, 2012

Answer 2

Just note that your original text says things that "we" cannot change, while Margherite's translation says "I" cannot change.

Thank you. Yes, I noticed that. :) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 17, 2012