Just a short poem #16

Question

I have not been writing any poems lately because my dear friend Grace has suddenly sprung out of nowhere with absolutely drop dead gorgeous poems!!! But, hopefully no one will laugh at my attempt to write this little 'un....

Lágrimas en el oscuro, desesperación sobre la vida, y de repente el cielo es claro y una mágica abrazo volverse tu amor. Un sonrisa cruzes tu la cara y tu cuerpo es caliente en el abrazo. Y la vida no parecer tan duro, porque eres amada.

Tears in the dark, despair about life, and suddenly the sky is clear and a magical hug becomes your love. A smile crosses your face and your body is warm in the embrace. And life doesn't seem so hard, because you are loved.

Sometimes I think people take this for granted. But really, to me, there is nothing compared to a hug from someone you love.

Here is a wonderful song that I hope you all might like: She moved through the fair

¡Muchas gracias a todos!

Your grateful friend,

Kat =]

I love it.xoxoxo - Ranman, Apr 13, 2012

beautiful kat! - tonterias, Apr 13, 2012

Thanks, Ranman y Ton ton!!! :)))) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 13, 2012

I love it!:):) - rac1, Apr 14, 2012

Thanks, Rac!! - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

wow, that's neat. Love reading your poems! :))) - t1funnyface, Apr 14, 2012

Thanks! :) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

Very nice, Kat! - sanlee, Apr 14, 2012

Thank you, Sandy! :) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

Wow, Kat!!! Great job!!! Me encanta mucho!! :)) I voted for your poem. So beautiful. ;)) - iana01, Apr 14, 2012

Thank you, amiguita!! hugs to you too. ;) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

Answer 1

ORIGINAL TEXT: Tears in the dark, despair about life, and suddenly the sky is clear and a magical hug becomes your love. A smile crosses your face and your body is warm in the embrace. And life doesn't seem so hard, because you are loved.

TRADUCTION TO SPANISH: Lágrimas en la oscuridad, desesperanza sobre la vida y, de repente, el cielo se abre y un mágico abrazo se convierte en tu amor. Una sonrisa cruza tu cara y tu cuerpo está caliente en el abrazo... Y la vida no parece tan dura, porque eres amada.

Tu poema es muy bonito, Kat, evoca bellas imágenes, pero "¿a magical bug becomes your love"/"un mágico abrazo se convierte en tu amor?" Eso no lo comprendo, tal vez haya alguna expresión en inglés relacionada que yo no conozco.

Muy bonito poema, con mucho sentimiento y profundo. cuando hay magia no importan las expresiones - paco, Apr 13, 2012

Thanks Paco y Cae!!! I don't have time to explain now, but later I will explain more if you want. :) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

Answer 2

Y aquí está uno para tí.

Aww.... muchas gracias. I could use one today!! :))) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 13, 2012

aww! - rac1, Apr 14, 2012

Really nice one Ranman! - bandit51jd, Apr 14, 2012

Ranman, so sweet picture together with the sentence. Kat, see? You have so many hugs now. ;)) I - iana01, Apr 14, 2012

Haha, I know! I feel much better now. :))))) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

Answer 3

Hi Kat! I'm glad to see you writing poems again and that you're feeling a lot better. Here's a little something for you:

Click me, I don't bite.

Have a great weekend!

lol It made me cry! Dang you!!! But thank you, amiguita. - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

:))))) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

Aww.. Sorry!! **hug** :)) - cheskasullivan, Apr 14, 2012

It's okay, I was glad. :) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

Answer 4

Kat, amiguita, I am sending you many hugs!! Even I think this guy on the picture would love to give as many as you like.

Haha! Awesome! :))) Muchas gracias mi querido amiguita!!! You are such a precious friend. :) Many hugs to you from me!! :)))) - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012

jejeje. thanks, amiguita. It is so nice of you. thanks!! :)))) - iana01, Apr 14, 2012

Answer 5

Para mí, escribir no es fácil, no puede poner las palabras en todos los días. Así que cuando tuya leo, mi corazón es más ligero y trato de vivir tus pensamientos. Estas ranas me estoy viviendo tus pensamientos, hacia mis amigos aquí.

Por favor, corrija mi español.

For me writing doesn't come easily, I can't crank the words out everyday. So when I read yours, my heart is lighter and I try to live your thoughts. These frogs are me living your thoughts, towards my friends here.

Oh, thank you Bandit!!! :))) I'm glad. =] - 00cdfbd9, Apr 14, 2012